- Reviewed Ex. 2 & Ex. 3, pp. 170-172.
- Reviewed feedback from Task 4.
- Your paragraphs were very short this time. Please add more detail for your second drafts. Take some time to think.
- People make (not give or do) contributions.
- Artist contributions should be artistic contributions. Science contributions should be scientific contributions. In this case, you need to use the adjective forms of the artist and science.
- Through technology is possible to create new methods of food production should be Through technology it is possible to create new methods of food production. A prepositional phrase cannot be the subject of the sentence.
- Natural phrasing: relevant contributions.
- Effective relative clause: The main contributions are made by artists or scientists, each of which is valued differently depending on the society that they live in.
- In the lab re-wrote Task 3 (Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts.).
Homework
- Revise Task 4 (9.27.11). Print it and staple it to your first draft.
- Study Problem 7 on sentence boundary problems, p. 164, 166-167.
- Complete Ex. 4, p. 172.
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