- In the lab re-wrote Task 4 (It is generally agreed that society benefits from the work of its members. Compare the contributions of artists with the contributions of scientists. Which type of contribution do you think is valued more by your society?)
- Reviewed the definitions of the following sentence structure errors: run-on sentences, commas splices, and fragments.
- Reviewed sentence Ex. 4, p. 172.
- Reviewed sentence structure errors from your drafts:
- Fragments: In addition, scientists who make a significant impact on the developing world. This phrase contains only a subject modified by an adjective clause. You need to add a verb to make an independent clause.
- Comma Splices: Every time we read fiction books, we imagine every situation, we mentally create the scenarios and the actions that the main characters are exposed to. You have two independent clauses here. A comma is not strong enough to separate them. A semicolon is stronger and maintains a close relationship between them.
- Other Missing Parts: Although nonfiction books help to know about real events, I would prefer to read... The verb help follows this pattern: help someone to do something. The example sentence needs someone: Although nonfiction books help people to know about real events...
Homework
Friday, September 30
- Your packet for Tasks 1 & 2, including a completed cover sheet, 4 drafts for Task 1 and 3 drafts for Task 2. Put it in my box in Room 103.
Friday, October 7
- Task 3, Draft 4 with your completed packet.
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