- In the lab, wrote Draft 3 of Task 9 (Is it better for a country's top military commander to be independent of the government? Or is it better for a country's top military commander to also be the head of the government?)
- Gave feedback on example sentences with connecting words. (See white handout.) Study the revised sentences below:
- Tulga agrees that Wendy's has delicious crispy chicken. Conversely, Maguino and Felipe disagree.
- Mexico has strict rules. Conversely, Greece has very lax laws.
- Life requires people to do many difficult things, namely taking care of themselves.
- People like junk food, if admittedly they know that it is unhealthy.
- My paper is good enough for this class, if admittedly my errors are many.
- I have all the tools I need; thus, I will be able to fix the car without having to call a mechanic.
- Discussed most and most of. (See http://profknick.wordpress.com/2008/02/05/the-difference-between-most-and-most-of/.)
- Ate cookies to celebrate your improved sentence structure!!! Yay! Shared example sentences with connecting word while we ate.
Homework
- Task 10 Draft 2 without my or others' help. Identify and correct the errors yourself. You can do it!
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